lovers lane

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    lovers lane

    beautiful eyes open across a pillow top
    it seems time will stop
    the earth slows and sounds wane
    a frozen moment without stain

    your body close to mine
    our hearts beat in time
    with a simple smile of pleasure
    this moment should last forever

    some say perfection is unattainable
    for most things that is explainable
    but in your arms with your hearts affection
    i have found a brief moment of perfection

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    koolmom0 commented on lovers lane

    01-14-2010

    This is beautifully said honey. It is well written and definately a fave. Koolmom

    themommyof2 commented on lovers lane

    11-24-2009

    Very well said. Intimate and personal. great read.

    lucindaclaire commented on lovers lane

    11-24-2009

    Hey this is really nice work! When did you start writing? It has always saved me whether it's poetry, journaling, or writing letters. keep writing Jon. You never know who you will touch with your words.

    dumplin commented on lovers lane

    10-16-2009

    OMG, jonny, you sound so in love. I miss that feeling.

    Saylar commented on lovers lane

    10-16-2009

    I can envision what you are seeing and feeling~ truly a wonderful and touching piece of work. Thank you for sharing such an intimate moment in time.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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