Bissful Echoes

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By:Josh Shafer

1-26-08

Bissful Echoes

Blissful echoes

Dreams from the past

Daunting nightmares

Of lives from the last

Energy Potential

Burning like fire

Sindging the fabric

Of my desire

Done this before

Will do it again

Over and over

The original sin

Garden of Eden

Adam and Eve

Forbidden fruit

Is what we receive

Taste its sweet nectar

Aroma in the air

Perceive it as beauty

Handle with care

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rossmangeles commented on Bissful Echoes

06-20-2009

You are very poetic. Indeed, very nicely written. You make my day. Keep it up!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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