Chance

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  • Lost Love

    Chance

    To AM.G
    I miss my chance to be with u
    I lied to myself
    i lied to my heart
    your all i ever wanted yet
    u confuss me worse then anyone i know
    babe your all i ever wanted

    But i'm not your thing
    so know all i can do is be there for you
    I never said those four letter words
    that could have made a difference in how this all turned out

    But whatever happens baby
    i will always love u
    just think i crazy for u
    some think it's funny but it's how i feel
    I loved u from the first day i met you

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    Margot commented on Chance

    09-05-2009

    very good writing it sounds like u have loved and lost alot like me
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    BCP commented on Chance

    12-15-2008

    read this poema again and revise it, it good but to wordy, use three or four stanza lines. keep writing, you will be a good writer.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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