Forgive me:

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    Forgive me:
    To Tabitha Allen
    Honey just tell what to do,
    Baby i know i made a big mistake,
    Sweetheart please forgive your all i want,
    your all i need to live,

    Baby Girl i'm beggin you
    please don't leave me
    I'm so so so so Sorry
    i never ment to hurt you,
    Honey i will do anything you want me to.

    Sweetheart i never changed my mind
    i still want to marry you and be yours.
    I Love You,I'm so sorry.

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    BCP commented on Forgive me:

    12-15-2008

    revise this one as it sounds like a letter or prose. if you use three stanza's or four stay all the way through the poem with those number of lines.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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