Confused

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    Confused

    I cannot breathe when you choke me with your thoughts

    I cannot speak my plans when your tearing them apart.

    I gave you me and gave it all

    You gave me hell and watched me fall.

    Sometimes it's too hard to not want to go back

    And sometimes it's not enough to keep forward on this track.

    You want me or you don't, that's not an offer

    I want you to help me set me free, but then I want you to hold me close.

    I guess i'm just as confused as you.


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    drewking commented on Confused

    10-02-2009

    good piece of work, not much said,yet says so much...
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    tinygirl commented on Confused

    12-04-2008

    ive had to deal with a time like this in my life as well tinygirl
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    amamimichiyo commented on Confused

    12-02-2008

    wow, me too, i got confused but i'm kinda feel that i can relate to your poem 'coz m still confused now of my feelings for my guy best friend if i still have feelings for him or haven't already.perfect, i love ur peom so much!!!
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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