defeat of the blind

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    defeat of the blind

    taken over by my love
    truly thought that all was true
    only saw sunshine above
    only felt full joy anew

    sacrificing, freely gave
    pouring gifts without delay
    working happily, a slave
    glad to suffer, come what may

    freely he received and took
    brushing off my slow demise
    wouldn't suffer me a look
    wouldn't gaze with selfless eyes

    rather glares and turns away
    takes away the loving pose
    hands me insult and dismay
    'stead of love, and on it goes

    so my countenance declines
    so my face looks at the ground
    so a heart I thought was mine
    is just not there. not around.

    asking all my questions why
    sit in limbo in a daze
    confused and lonely am i
    cause i thought my loving ways

    were what he needs in his life
    to give to him a love complete
    did my best to be his wife
    but wound up suffering defeat

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    Insight commented on defeat of the blind

    10-08-2009

    I like the style that you expressed yourself in. It swims in parrells and sets in twin orbits. Keep up the good work.
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    hdmac commented on defeat of the blind

    09-12-2009

    Wow-that is truly a crushing blow. There are guys out there who will treat you much better than that.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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