Doubts

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Doubts

Having doubts
Is it so?
Can't help it,
don't want it this way.
Should we stop?
I hope not.
Don't want to
maybe we need to....
Can't stop loving you,
But I can stop seeing you...

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Doubts

06-03-2011

I like the way your words flow they rhyme without rhyming, and that is cool.

LilliannaFenton

06/07/2011

Haha thanks! (: When I write, I write what I feel, and sometimes it rhymes, and sometimes it doesn't. :P I don't really care if it does either way. xP I try to write my emotions and I always hope that someone else will see what I wrote and they'll know that they aren't the only ones dealing with it. :3

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

LilliannaFenton’s Poems (27)

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Hope 1
We Were -Perfect-. 0
Am I? 0
He Cares. 1
Blood 1
Victim 0
Sweet Sensation 0
Why....? 0
Help Me 0
Going Crazy 0
Wolf 0
Kyla 0
Forever 0
Doubts 1
Misery 1
Escaped 1
Life 0
Love you 0
Scars 1
Or 1
End It 0
Death....My best friend 0
Given Up 1
Meaning of Love 2
Selfish 1
Till I Die 1