Dreaming

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    Dreaming

    I'm just sitting here thinking and dreaming,
    of a life I feel would have so much meaning.

    There was so much pain and sorrow in my life,
    I was just tired of being the "faithful wife".

    I've done everything a wife can do,
    except wipe your butt with a tissue.

    Now I've set out on my own separate way,
    hoping to make it through every day.

    With no help from you to take care of our children,
    but at least life no longer feels like a prison.

    Try and fight me tooth and nail,
    I know in the end...this time I'll prevail!

    You've beat me down to the lowest of low,
    the bumps and bruises are all that show.

    Because my mind and heart are starting to heal,
    and the happy life I dreamed of can now be real!

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    Artie commented on Dreaming

    11-29-2009

    Nice!! I like the feeling this has in it - 10 from me

    kdarcy commented on Dreaming

    05-31-2009

    You will go far, now that you seek was is unrehersed and real to a new person you forgot existed ... you. Keep writing and sharing, you shall prevail for you, and those that love and help you on your journey.

    brado1962 commented on Dreaming

    05-29-2009

    Every sorrow you express through pen, remains on the paper. Thus allowing room for joy to enter. Keep writing, great work!

    soulwriter commented on Dreaming

    05-18-2009

    Poetry the great healer, a way to reveal ourselves and to expose our souls, and when all the words are transposed we transcend to be the best person that we can be... good write, stay strong!

    WordSlinger commented on Dreaming

    04-01-2009

    Nice 9

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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