DROWNING

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    • tdizzle
    • hey guys I posted some of my poems please read them and tell me what you think about them

    DROWNING

    DROWNING

     
    DROWNING IN A SEA OF DISPEAR

    CAN’T BREAT THE AIR RIGHT

    DROWNING IN A SEA OF ANGER

    NO ONE SEAMS TO CARE.

    I SCREAM, BUT THEY ALL JUST STAIR

    WONDER IF THEY CAN EVEN HEAR

    THE ROARING WIND SLPASHING WAVES

    REACHING FOR A HAND

    EVERYONE JUST TURNS AWAY

     

    DROWNING IN A SEA OF HEARTACH

    CAN’T SEE THE LIGHT JUST OUT OF SIGHT

    DROWNING IN A SEA OF EMPTYNESS

    NOONE SEAMS TO CARE

    ON ONE TO CATCH ME IF I FALL

    CAN ANY ONE EVEN SEE ME

    EVERY ONE JUST TURNS AWAY

     

    DROWNING IN A SEA A TEARS

    CAN’T BREATH OR SEE RIGHT

    DROWNING IN A SEA OF

    5/4/2010

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    tdizzle’s Poems (57)

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