TRYING TO HELP

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    • tdizzle
    • hey guys I posted some of my poems please read them and tell me what you think about them

    TRYING TO HELP

    TRYING TO HELP

     

    WHEN YOU TYRING TO HELP

    BUT JUST HURT OTHERS.

    WHEN YOUR INTENTIONS ARE GOOD,

    BUT ACTIONS ARE WRONG.

    WHEN YOUR CRYING INSIDE

    OTHERS ARE ON THE OUTSIDE

    WHEN YOUR TRYING TO HELP

    BUT MAKE THINGS WORSE

    WHEN YOUR INTENTIONS ARE GOOD

    BUT CAN’T O ANYTHING RIGHT

    WHEN YOU WANT TO GIVE UP THE FIGHT.

    WHO IS RIGHT?

    WHEN YOUR TRYING TO HELP

                             BUT JUST HURT OTHERS.

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    tdizzle’s Poems (57)

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    LONG AGO. 0
    MY WORLD 1
    MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU 0
    MY BABY! 0
    LONG TIME NOW 0
    MY 0
    NEVER REALLY KNEW 0
    RUIEND 0
    SAILING ALONE 1
    SOMEONE 0
    SORRY IS SO MUCH 0
    SPECIAL LOVE 0
    SPREAD MY WINGS. 0
    FOR THE LONGEST TIME 0
    THE SUN WAS SHINNING 0
    THE WIND THE NIGHT 0
    THE WORLD 0
    THE YEARS 0
    THE YEARS 0
    THINKING OF YOU 0
    THOUGHT 0
    THROUGH 0
    WHat happened 0
    TINY LITTLE!!! 0
    TORN 0
    TRYING TO HELP 0
    WATCH 0
    WHAT ARE 0
    WHAT HAPPENED 0
    WHAT HAPPENS???? 0
    WHEN I 0
    WHEN YOU 0
    YOU CALLED ME 0
    YOU WANT TO BE FRINEDS 0
    YOU SAY!! 0
    YOU WANT 0
    YOU WOULD 0
    YOU’RE A DRUNK!!!! 0
    YOUR 0
    FOR YEARS NOW 0
    FIRST 0
    FEAR 0
    DROWNING 0
    DREAM LOVE 0
    DON’T WANT!!!! 0
    DON’T KNOW 0
    DID YOU EVER?? 0
    BROKEN 0
    BECAUSE OF YOU 0
    ANGRY 0
    ALL GROWN UP 0
    ALL BECAUSE OF YOU 0
    A STRANGER 0
    MATHEW 0
    FORGIVE AND FORGET 0
    to whom it may concern: 0
    FOR YEARS 0