SAILING ALONE

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    • hey guys I posted some of my poems please read them and tell me what you think about them

    SAILING ALONE

    SAILING ALONE

     

    I AM SAILING AN OPEN SEA

    THERE IS NOONE TO TALK TO

    NO ONE TO TURN TO

    NO WHERE TO RUN

    SAILING AN OPEN SEA ALONE

    WHO WILL GO WITH ME

    WHO WILL GO??
    SAILING AN OPEN SEA

    WANTING SOMEONE TO

    SAIL WITH ME

    WILL YOU SAIL WITH ME?

    I AM NO LONGER ALONE

    MY TWO FAVROITE PEOPLE BY MYSIDE

    SAILING AN OPEN SEA

    NO LONGER ALONE

    YOUR BY MYSIDE..

     

    SEPTEMBER 25TH 1997

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    8ineffable8 commented on SAILING ALONE

    10-26-2013

    I think it's a little repetitive. Good effort though

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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