MATHEW

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THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN ABOUT MY BABY BROTHER MATHEW WHO WAS TAKEN FROM US BY A DRUNK DRIVER.

MATHEW

WHEN YOU WHERE THREE
I HELPED YOU COUNT 1-2-3
HELPED YOU WRITE YOUR ABC'S
WHEN YOU WHERE FIVE
I HELPED YOU TIE YOUR SHOES
HELPED YOU GET READY FOR SCHOOL
WHEN YOU WHERE ELEVEN
YOU MADE A FRIEND FOR LIFE
HER LITTLE BUDDY A FRIEND FOR LIFE
WHEN YOU WHERE THIRTEEN
YOU CHASED MONSTERS FROM THE CLOSET
THE MONSTER CHASER FOR LIFE.
WHEN YOU WHERE FOURTEEN
YOU BECAME A SOCCER STAR
THE BEST SOCCER PLAYER OF ALL
WHEN YOU WHERE FIFTEEN
YOU GAVE A SHOLDER TO CRY ON
ONE OF THE KNITE IN SHINNING ARMOR
WHEN YOU WERE SIXTEEN
YOU WHERE A PROTECTOR TO EVERYONE
ONE OF THE KNITE IN SHINNING ARMOR
WHEN YOU WERE SEVENTEEN
YOUR LIFE WAS TAKEN AWAY
FOREVER IN OUR HEARTS YOU WILL STAY.

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

tdizzle’s Poems (57)

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LONG AGO. 0
MY WORLD 1
MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU 0
MY BABY! 0
LONG TIME NOW 0
MY 0
NEVER REALLY KNEW 0
RUIEND 0
SAILING ALONE 1
SOMEONE 0
SORRY IS SO MUCH 0
SPECIAL LOVE 0
SPREAD MY WINGS. 0
FOR THE LONGEST TIME 0
THE SUN WAS SHINNING 0
THE WIND THE NIGHT 0
THE WORLD 0
THE YEARS 0
THE YEARS 0
THINKING OF YOU 0
THOUGHT 0
THROUGH 0
WHat happened 0
TINY LITTLE!!! 0
TORN 0
TRYING TO HELP 0
WATCH 0
WHAT ARE 0
WHAT HAPPENED 0
WHAT HAPPENS???? 0
WHEN I 0
WHEN YOU 0
YOU CALLED ME 0
YOU WANT TO BE FRINEDS 0
YOU SAY!! 0
YOU WANT 0
YOU WOULD 0
YOU’RE A DRUNK!!!! 0
YOUR 0
FOR YEARS NOW 0
FIRST 0
FEAR 0
DROWNING 0
DREAM LOVE 0
DON’T WANT!!!! 0
DON’T KNOW 0
DID YOU EVER?? 0
BROKEN 0
BECAUSE OF YOU 0
ANGRY 0
ALL GROWN UP 0
ALL BECAUSE OF YOU 0
A STRANGER 0
MATHEW 0
FORGIVE AND FORGET 0
to whom it may concern: 0
FOR YEARS 0