DROWNING

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DROWNING

 

DROWNING 

 

 

 

 

 

I just wanted to be with you 24 7,

I just thought I was in heaven,

I didn’t know you couldn’t breath,

I wasn’t trying to be mean,

I just wanted you to see,

How much you mean to me,

I just wanted you to be next to me,

So you can see how proud you made me be,

For having such a beauty,

For my queen.

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loveangel4life commented on DROWNING

05-23-2009

Oh gosh.....haha....this sounds just like what my boyfriend tries to explain to me when I say that he's smothering me. Only u say it in a better way. lol. Nice poem.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

3N37JV’s Poems (37)

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