HOT DAY

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    ONE NIGHT IT JUST CAME TO ME

    HOT DAY

    HOT DAY

     

     

    As I start to reminisce on this hot day how we used to sweat,

    Now I miss when u were the one I used to undress,

    I don’t take my time like I did my first time,

    I don’t close my eyes because I don’t have any more feelings inside,

    All u see is a grown man cry,

    When he knows you’re not mine,

    He goes back to an empty life full of lies,

    Because he knew he had a wife,

    Without love he should continue his life until he dies.

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    lcole commented on HOT DAY

    06-02-2009

    this is deep, and very very heart felt and I know a situation simular to what your speaking of and that person feels the same way. REAL TALK

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

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