Dusk Arriving

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    Dusk Arriving

    Seas of green
    Yonder the bluest of blue
    Subtle the ferns lie await til the day settles
    to tired to fight the shadowing smile of lunulas cratered face
    The breeze cooling jaspers
    lilies waving their upside down umbrellas
    Beneath the purest sunset the wild beast lay

    Secretly time sits still to marvel at His grace
    To admire the beauty He has placed
    Intimacy with the human race

    Crickets orchestrated sweet hymns
    as the dandelions mounted the thriving hills

    Expectedly attention tired, losing the ability to resist
    the dreams floating among the drooping eye lids
    Another day departing with slumber amidst

    Gazing into the cryptic dimension
    a dream lead journey begins
    To have become entwined in imagination
    Spun into the minds web

    as any story it eventually ends driven back into reality
    with an eye opening to the
    morning sun




    !!!!!!!!!

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    optimistic commented on Dusk Arriving

    06-01-2009

    Interesting I was really puzzled Secretly time sits still to marvel at his grace I like that line. I could never think the journey could be that long great job!

    Artie commented on Dusk Arriving

    05-30-2009

    This is amazing! You really painted a beautiful picture here. Gazing into the cryptic dimension a dream lead journey begins To have become entwined in imagination Spun into the minds web All I can say is - Wow!

    origionalmerlin commented on Dusk Arriving

    04-08-2009

    grrr... had same happen to mine... a good write and a great read, don't delete the "persons comment" an example of such stylish comment deserves to remain where it is.

    Tray4 commented on Dusk Arriving

    03-30-2009

    I think freestyle tata had something to do with my rating,due to the argument we had earlier and harsh words went back and forth untill it was resolved.

    dahlusion commented on Dusk Arriving

    03-04-2009

    Wonderfully magical imagery taken from a delightful imagination. I do not understand why your ratings are so low.

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