Natural Beauty

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    Natural Beauty
    The tempest sea bleeds
    against the shore
    The sand stained waves
    flow effortlessly
    wind adorned
    Tides pouring
    their over flow
    across the sun kissed floor
    Satin shells
    water torn
    sweep about foot laden paths
    To become fond memories
    of those who once made the waters laugh
    Each granule
    carries a story of the past
    Heavens ledge is smiling over
    While by and by
    the passions ride
    rippling long and deep
    Speaking in a unique language
    We cannot retrieve

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    Singcanary commented on Natural Beauty

    08-06-2009

    Enjoyed your poem. Technically balanced. Very virgo ;-) and nature felt.
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    Chrisjan commented on Natural Beauty

    05-29-2009

    A very well written poem. The creativity and heart filled imagary are awesomely formed into this treasure.
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    origionalmerlin commented on Natural Beauty

    05-07-2009

    since i read all of the postings of somone i am rating, rate all or not rate comment or not commentetc (as in my bio and i come back and read rate and comment again at later times the rating system and comments seem to reflect more often on the raters too often the subject of the pome or prose judge not lest... yep it fits everywhere still a 10
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    origionalmerlin commented on Natural Beauty

    04-05-2009

    hmmm did i rate this yet??? well... merlin (seaborn or from the sea) how could i not like this?
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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