ETERNAL HOPE

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  • Lost Love

    ETERNAL HOPE

    don't ask me not to love you
    for this i cannot do
    i am not asking in return
    the same sweat love from you

    for if i did not love you
    no reason would i need
    the belief in hope and who i love
    in which my heart can feed

    right now i know there's others
    there's nothing i can do
    my patience hopes it makes you see
    how in love i am with you

    so loving you i always will
    on this you can relay
    and if you ever change your mind
    my heart it will reply

    it will say that it still loves you
    and that you are my friend
    and with joy and jubilation
    i will love you til the end

    and when the end has come
    and we must say our goodbyes
    the last thing that i hope to see
    is love deep in your eyes.

    and if you still don't love me
    even when i finally pass
    in heaven i will wait for you
    and hope you'll love me then at last.

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    Isaiahjanae commented on ETERNAL HOPE

    02-04-2010

    This is an amazing poem & wonderfully includes the vision of Heaven when we are reunited w/ those we love so dearly !!!

    organicchick commented on ETERNAL HOPE

    05-19-2009

    I love this!!!! I hope you gave this to her!!! It would have me melting at your feet. This poem just oozes love!! I put it in my favs with a few other of your poems.

    goaliedad2252

    10/27/2009

    no one ti give it too

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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