A SILENT TEAR

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    A SILENT TEAR



    I write these words in silent tear,
    they were not meant for you to hear
    my heart is what these words contain
    they bring you close with each refrain.
    but only in a state of mind
    for not always is my life so kind.
    i learned so much from loving you
    my fondest wish is you have too.
    i know you think its for the best
    that we lay it all to rest
    i can't foresee another day
    without your love to guide the way.
    but if it all did not exist
    there'd be so much i would have missed
    like the kindness in your eyes
    that assured me you were Gods surprise
    the memories are here to stay
    no one can take them away
    you need to know my love was real
    and this is truly how i feel
    this silent tear's not from remorse
    and does not come from my loves loss
    like Gods tears of morning dew
    it's from the joys of loving you.
    i miss you...
    Copyright ©2008 Robert Longinetti

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    Isaiahjanae commented on A SILENT TEAR

    02-02-2010

    This is truly a beautiful poem. Excellant writing flow. This poem is all so true for toooooo many spouses. Thank you for writing in such a heartfelt manner.
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    kamaldahal commented on A SILENT TEAR

    07-02-2009

    Nice and heart touching poem, I liked much which is reputable and conscious writing. Selected words are good and descent language you have used. I am very much fond of reading like this pleasing writing which can give much relax to heart. Kamal
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    xntric commented on A SILENT TEAR

    06-10-2009

    This is a beautiful poem. Love leaves its mark on us, good or bad, helps mold us into who we are. Thankyou so much for your comment on my poem too.
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    organicchick commented on A SILENT TEAR

    05-19-2009

    Good poem........I almost cried when i read this. Bittersweet is love, isn't it?! It does get the creative juices flowing!!
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