Finding Peace

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    Short and sweet dont ya think!!!

    Finding Peace

    With Every Breath I Take....
    I'm CloserAnd Closer To Those
    Pearly Gates....
    If One Day, Someday Soon, I Should Breathe My Last....
    Weep Not For Me,
    I'm In HIS Arms At Last!!!

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    Dark commented on Finding Peace

    09-30-2010

    WOW.....true words of death.....but comfort.......IDK -Dark

    lonewolf commented on Finding Peace

    09-23-2010

    very well said kristina. a very short poem, but a very strong statement.

    Kristina

    09/23/2010

    Thank you sweetie.

    Chaos128 commented on Finding Peace

    09-22-2010

    you've certainly made a striking, and straightforward statement, and I don't wanna be a bucket of cold water, K, but is being dead the only way to find peace?

    Kristina

    09/23/2010

    Of course not. I wrote this in five minutes after hearing a dear family friend had passed and I was trying to give comfort. I find peace in every day life, I have to or else I'd go insane.LOL.

    FranzJ commented on Finding Peace

    09-22-2010

    a short,sweet and strong testement to your faith- - - - - - - - -

    Rhymer commented on Finding Peace

    09-22-2010

    When those secure in his arms pass away, it is a time for rejoicing. Ten from me.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    Kristina’s Poems (28)

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    Reborn 1
    What if 2
    My Flow 3
    The Dance 3
    Backstabbed by love 2
    Thoughts... 3
    Falling Star 6
    Finding Peace 8
    Screaming To Be Free 9
    Another year passes 3
    Memories 8
    Rebirth 9
    Confusion 2
    Betrayed 7
    To My Daughters 12
    To My Son 9
    Hollow 3
    Ain't that a shame 2
    This Deep Sadness 13
    Darkness 9
    Painful Parting 8
    A silent Prayer 6
    Mine To Keep 14
    Seperate Ways 3
    Moving on 3
    Brave new Me 6
    Heartache 3
    Just Me 10