A Girl in my Dreams

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everyone has fantasy's right? but this isn't just a normal ordinary girl.

A Girl in my Dreams

 



Thinking of you, where ever you might be
knowing that your alive
and inside my dream
whenever i sleep,
your always there.
i just wish you were real.

Your touch, your smile, and your beauty
Gives my heart a sweet harmony
That melody was the utmost preeminent tune
That would be heeded by every little whits
You were my dream, that angel up above those stars
I endeavered to grasp of whats untrue
because this feeling i have for you
couldn't uncover the clues
But yet again, it was only a fluke


When the moon shines vividly
My body would be quiescently
and i would vision of you evidently
 
The sight of you makes my eyes turn fluorescently
because your eyes are bright as day
that shifted my heart as soft as clay
That now my heart belongs with you


When the sky changes color into blue
You start to dissappear from my sight
I dashed swiftly to you and held you tight
But you start to evaporate like clouds clearing away
The darkest night vanished and turned to a vibrant day 
My body wakes up from unconsciousness
The implausible girl in my dream was just from my dreariness.

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