I Wonder

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This poem is for Jeanelle, i hope i see her again.. i just wonder..

I Wonder

With out you life is so impossible to live

Days go by, I think of you.

I could never believe

That someone like me, know someone as beautiful as you

Everyday I smile, because of you

And every night I dream of embracing you.

I wonder why I can’t sleep at night

And why is she always on my mind?

She’s like ensnared inside my thought and dream

Like trapped in a cage without a gleam

I wonder what life is in store for me, with you.

I wonder if I could ever see you once more

I wonder if you feel the same way as I do.

And at that second of time, I kissed you

I know, distance separates you and I

But my heart feels like it has an emotion on its own

My heart picks for someone with aspiration

As if it has its own ambition

I just wonder if the future is how I wish it would be

A future with you and me

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ClearlySays commented on I Wonder

01-29-2011

This wasn't necessarily sad, but hopeful in a breathless way. Like you're holding your breath for the future, I liked it a lot!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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