If She were Mine

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    i was falling for her, but it could never be true

    If She were Mine

    When I first saw her beautiful face

    All I could do was gaze

    Because her beauty caught my eyes

    That melted my heart from an arctic ice

     

    I don’t want to do anything irrational

    So I walk and talk to her as a friend

    If she were mine

    She would be the only motivation I need

    To walk the earth with ease

    I would do anything to give her bliss

    I would give earth peace

    If it satisfied, her

    Love is all I ever sought after.

     

    My thoughts and dreams have been all about her

    My heart would be pounding

    At the second we touch

    An instant gaze to her eyes

    Would lit my heart with craze

     

    There’s something about her

    That makes my heart beat

     She’s like the storm in my heart

    That won’t let me sleep

    Because all I think about is her

     

    Her heart is just like a maze

    I struggle in daze

    Because this maze

    Brought me to different places in her heart

    That led me puzzled

    Because she could never be mine

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