God Help Me Get Rid of my Illness

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  • daddybabydaisy
  • its been so long sense i have been on here. the last time i was on here i think i was like 14. omg. i cant believe i tried to forget about poetry. so happy i came to my senses because it's the best way to express your self.

God Help Me Get Rid of my Illness

I woke up this morning sad and depressed.
I couldn't do anything. I was a mess.
My heart hurted, my stomach ached, my head was spinning, and i was going to be late. I set up in my bed and took a deep breath.....
I knew something was wrong. It felt like death.
I went to the hospital and they said they can't find nothing wrong with me.
Everyday the feeling got worst. My head spent and I couldn't sleep.
I called my mother and she said pray that god help you find a way.
so i set up and prayed, and read a chapter from the bible.
the next morning I woke up, and I felt brand new. I felt like I was a new person. The lord took my problem away. Sence that then on, I pray everyday.

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TheInspiration commented on God Help Me Get Rid of my Illness

08-06-2009

that's a good poem daisy... most oftentimes, we don't realize at a young age how much we need God in our lives and that without Him, we'll never be at peace or make it in this life... the devil is such a busy character and does his job so well, but if we keep God 1st in our lives, all things will fall in place... continue writing and most of all continue to love God and search his word... he will give you all the answers you need...

amithissecret commented on God Help Me Get Rid of my Illness

08-06-2009

i love this one a 10 from me this is good your realy talented

scrye commented on God Help Me Get Rid of my Illness

08-06-2009

Another wonderfully written poem with plenty of emotion. Celebration of life anew. Great read thanks for sharing.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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