Goodbye

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    i attempted suicide about a week later i wrote this

    Goodbye

     Slowly the blade to my neck draws blood
    I won't get to say goodbye
    Blood from my neck all over the place
    Goddbye
    I stop and think about you,
    Do i really wanna say goodbye?
    I stop the bleeding for you
    Cause i don't wanna leave you
    Imagine how it would have been,
    If i had said Goodbye

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    Viper89 commented on Goodbye

    03-09-2011

    As long as your writing poetry like that don't say good bye!!! You should check out my poem "Farewell" it's among the same genre!
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    Ninjaboy commented on Goodbye

    02-23-2011

    you are truely a gifted poet, and i like how you show your love in this one by not dying so you dont have to say goodbye
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    TaCoNiNjA35F00

    02/23/2011

    Thanks so much it means a lot to me. You are very talented yourself

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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