HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

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    HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

    my heart and soul conspires in secret against my mind,
    to love you without end as if there was no time.
    they would give you anything and everything just to see you smile,
    while the logic of mind considers this to be vile.
    to it, love is nothing more than a chemical reaction,
    but to the heart and soul it is pure satisfaction.
    can love ever be truly understood by our minds
    is a question that remains unanswered since the dawn of time
    lucky are those who have found their love
    by it their hearts are comforted and their souls filled with peace
    but they must continue to fight for it, for in love,
    the mind is a deadly beast.

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    Kaleidoscope commented on HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

    11-10-2009

    Chemical reaction? Can love ever be truly understood? a little too much analyzing as if a chemical imbalance is being asked if this is what causes a serial killer to kill...Like beauty is in the eye of the beholder so, I believe is love..keep writing

    fallonmouton commented on HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

    11-10-2009

    very good, lke your wording. keep on writting.... i look forward to reading more

    Lyrix

    12/24/2009

    thank you... and i will definetly keep on writing

    jademelissa74 commented on HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

    06-21-2009

    The imagery used throughout this piece is outstanding! I really enjoyed the content and the level of interest that you managed to maintain. Great Job!

    ApatheticFish commented on HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

    05-28-2009

    I really like the idea of this poem! I can definitely relate to my brain being opposite to my heart and soul. I also like the rhyme scheme - it flowed very nicely!

    Lyrix

    08/11/2009

    thank you for reading it...and i really appreciate your input. not a lot of people agree with me without a conversation

    SEVEN commented on HEART, SOUL, AND MIND

    05-27-2009

    My Heart, Soul and Mind is gripped around this one...Im feelin this piece...Good job...Keep the pen flowing

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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