Home Sweet Imperfect Home

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    Home Sweet Imperfect Home

     Creaking floors

    Crackling ceilings

    Comforting sounds of my home

    Leaking pipes

    Dripping faucets

    Bathroom fixtures all in chrome

    Garbage disposal

    Clogged drains

    Needing to pay a plumber to fix

    Missing tiles

    Broken chimney

    Having to replace missing bricks

    Shabby cupboards

    Chipped porcelain

    Walls needing several coats of paint

    Tiny bedrooms

    Cracked windows

    Home need work but its still quaint

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    earthly commented on Home Sweet Imperfect Home

    05-28-2010

    A real 'home', not just a house, is imperfect-its the imperfections that make it home-nice write-Namaste...Earthly
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    DPoetKat

    05/28/2010

    Thank you kindly for your comment. I couldn't agree more with you. I love my imperfect home...

    Rhymer commented on Home Sweet Imperfect Home

    05-28-2010

    Excellent write, can relate to my own abode. 10 from me.............
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    DPoetKat

    05/28/2010

    thank you kindly for relating and of course for the compliment of giving me a ten....smile.

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