i am the night

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  • Dark Poetry

    i am the night

     whisper secrets in my ear
    tell me why, you are here
    now i have you in my grasp
    let me search through your past
    looking through your fears and pain
    let me slowly pick your brain
    i am the drakness in the night
    i am the one who snuffs out light
    i am the one living on stolen years
    i am the embodiment of your fears
    i am the night

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    poett commented on i am the night

    04-12-2013

    Great write. I truly love the passion put into it. You put your emotion in it and I could feel it in every line how much you wanted for this person to feel it too. Hugs n loved it.
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    sk8erpoet commented on i am the night

    04-09-2013

    Well, looky here. Another awesome poem (: I somehow believe every word of this. Great write...-sk8
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    Mandi commented on i am the night

    04-09-2013

    Ah, now here you have it. This a good start to individuality... an important part of writing. You have to write about things that are important to you, otherwise, your work will never completely satisfy you.
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    Crush commented on i am the night

    04-08-2013

    me likes. "let me slowly pick your brain" very nice. this touched me as I have a very personal connection with the dark and night-time. ( one suggestion, if I may be so bold. the poem may flow better if you maybe reworked it to read : "living out my stolen years the embodiment of fears". but like I said, I like the poem either way.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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