I SEE...

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    I SEE...

    As I close my eyes I see you and me,
    Living the way we won't it to be,
    With wonderful kids in our eyes,
    So don't you dare say your good-byes,
    Because we got a future to hold,
    Till the day we get old,
    All I wanted was to make fun of your ears,
    And to catch all of your tears,
    To give you a shoulder to lean on,
    But its hard to do that now that your gone,
    Because everything now just seems all wrong,
    But I can still see us pushing each other into thing,
    And how much fun it really brings,
    You are the first and you are the last,
    You are better than any girl in the past,
    And I will always do anything for you maybe,
    Cause you are my number one baby.

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    Metaldoll commented on I SEE...

    04-13-2009

    Nice. Very refreshing and such a simple and honest but very beautiful way to say "I love You". I like it.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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