Thank God it wasn’t love. . .


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    Thank God it wasn’t love. . .

    Finally it’s over between you and me
    Us together is not the way it’s supposed to be
    Can’t you see I never wanted you back
    Kisses, Hugs, it was all just an act
    U were the one who caused me pain
    But now everything is down the drain
    In all my life I have never felt so mad
    That I can hate someone so bad
    Can’t u see, I don’t want you around
    Ho just read the caps going down.

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    alaskawriter96 commented on Thank God it wasn’t love. . .


    Its a good way to express the anger, but honestly can u hate her that much? But the caps were a good touch. didn't notice that.

    ccslim commented on Thank God it wasn’t love. . .


    Nice touch tho in my mind I wanted you to tell me more why this story didn't fly!

    WordSlinger commented on Thank God it wasn’t love. . .


    Just a little love, I gave this a 7, keep your head up

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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