Thank God it wasn’t love. . .

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    Thank God it wasn’t love. . .
    Finally it’s over between you and me
    Us together is not the way it’s supposed to be
    Can’t you see I never wanted you back
    Kisses, Hugs, it was all just an act
    U were the one who caused me pain
    But now everything is down the drain
    In all my life I have never felt so mad
    That I can hate someone so bad
    Can’t u see, I don’t want you around
    Ho just read the caps going down.

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    alaskawriter96 commented on Thank God it wasn’t love. . .

    04-11-2009

    Its a good way to express the anger, but honestly can u hate her that much? But the caps were a good touch. didn't notice that.
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    ccslim commented on Thank God it wasn’t love. . .

    04-05-2009

    Nice touch tho in my mind I wanted you to tell me more why this story didn't fly!
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    WordSlinger commented on Thank God it wasn’t love. . .

    04-04-2009

    Just a little love, I gave this a 7, keep your head up
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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