WHAT I FEEL...

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    WHAT I FEEL...

    Its hard to finish the year,
    With a feeling because your not here,
    Now I have in my heart is fear,
    I'm trying so hard to be strong,
    But with this feeling it won't last long,
    I wish I was with you in a different place,
    So I wouldn't have to miss your beautiful face,
    It seems forever but only a while,
    Since I've seen that sexy smile,
    My heart is the color of black,
    Knowing that you probably won't be back,
    What I'm feeling could only be pain,
    It makes me cry like the rain,
    So I know it comes close to my last breath,
    Because what I see could only be death,

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    WordSlinger commented on WHAT I FEEL...

    04-04-2009

    Very emotional, I gave this a 7, keep your head up

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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