I stand a lone

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    • noreaga2882
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    I stand a lone

     My world is crashing down upon me
    With every moment more crucial than the other
    I stand alone in a dark lonely world 
    Pretending that all is alright as I watch my life deminish right before me
    How can I protect myself when I express myself I expose myself
    My screams of solidarity and pleas of desperation fall upon deaf ears, adverse to reformation
    I stand alone with blood stained blades dangling from my arms 
    With spent cases still smoking surrounding my feet trying to weather the storms
    I stand alone 
    Unconscious I lay plagued with death and a weary heart 
    I hope and pray that one person heard my deeply seated pleas and screams for mercy upon me
    Doctor's and nurses beat and pound on my chest trying to restore a broken and displaced heart
    Looking down on my lifeless body I can only think 
    What if!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The Mysterious One

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    Worthless commented on I stand a lone

    01-21-2011

    In my way of thinking and the way you think, may or may not be the same? I think negative and it seems your in the army so I'll leave it at that for now. Maybe you can explain and send me a message and read some of mine? I like it
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    WordSlinger commented on I stand a lone

    01-02-2010

    this is cool, as you were looking down, Angels were behind you, I like this write, ty WS
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    DarkChi commented on I stand a lone

    09-17-2009

    Awesome! i really like this...it's dark and deathly it's totally my style! you have so much creativity!
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    derfiniw23 commented on I stand a lone

    09-17-2009

    Really, really great stuff here! Like, it's so deep, and all the silly things in life seem selfish, and ridiculous. Make sure you fix your title though...it's capitals for a title. I Stand Alone ............not a lone. No biggie.
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    Lolee commented on I stand a lone

    09-17-2009

    This is truly profound. You speak of a world most of us know nothing about. Freedom obtained by the shedding of blood...how giving...how Christ-like. He shed His blood so that we may live, You shed yours so that we may be free...We owe you a debt we cannot pay.... We can only give our heart-felt thanks, which is totally lame. But, Thank you. My heart goes out to you.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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