Important to us

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I am not on drugs or anything this poem says i am just going through a rough time thats all

Important to us

What is important to us?
Life, Death,Love, or something useless.
Tell me.

Life is short to us these days.
Deathis a drug to us we tempt it everyday.
Love lasts for a short while when we leat expect it to.

Something useless it used to fill our time up.
Like a lust for our freinds that are with ppl.
Drugs that mess us up in way we feel good.

But do we realize that we have ppl that care for us dearly.
No we take them for granted more than we should.

But I am no person to judge someones lifestyle.
We should all just accept everyone as they are not what they are worth to us.

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Vincent commented on Important to us

08-25-2009

What is important in life.??? God, Love, familly, friends, happiness, understanding, compassion, honesty, the ability to love yourself. These are a few of the things to me that are important. About your poem. How do you judge art??? Artisticly. Smiles Vincent

forbiddenfruit

08/25/2009

Depends wether you like it or not or just think it it is missing something out of it

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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