just cry..

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just cry..

cry....its ok just cry....
i promise you its ok to cry...
let it all out just cry.....
i wont tell anyone just..cry....

Torment does not sustain
happiness does not last
smiles disappear quite fast
obligations feel like restraints
depression feels like the heaviest weight
on the mind...and it hates...
it feeds sorrow to the rest of u...
it lets every thought get the best of you
you never feel complete or get the better view
i'd rather cry, or see u cry
than let life get the best of you

so y dont you
if you need to
you should feel free to
we all need to
if it's normal
then its normal
dont look at it as a burden
if your hurtin
bleed it out...holdin it in...
just isnt worth it
so if you need to
if u want to
you shouldnt even have to try...
its ok just...cry...

rain clears eventually
but in that moment time is forgotten
and missery, lingers suspiciously
right through you and u might not know it
but your face sure as hell shows it
we both know it
dont ever feel like it isnt the right time
if your emotions overload and u need to cry
everytime i write...
its my way of just letting myself cry
cuz why should i...hold back what i feel
behind these eyes...behind these lines...
behind this heart...behind this mind
cuz i feel fine...right now writin
express ur feelings..however u would like it

so y dont you
if you need to
you should feel free to
we all need to
if it's normal
then its normal
dont look at it as a burden
if your hurtin
bleed it out...holdin it in...
just isnt worth it
so if you need to
if u want to
you shouldnt even have to try...
its ok just...cry...

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XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on just cry..

08-10-2009

I absolutley LOOOVE this. its so beautiful, i almost cried readng it. story of my life.

silentwriter commented on just cry..

07-02-2009

I love this poem i feel like it is talking to me cuz in my family crying is a sign of weakness nice to be told to just cry

SilentPoet

07/02/2009

yeah crying isnt showing that your weak. its just an emotion like every other.. you just need to let it out sometimes.. glad you enjoyed it..

kittman101 commented on just cry..

07-01-2009

this poem is very deep, very creative and very expressive. I like the way it flowed, the emotions were interesting. It was like talking to someone who was told its not alright to cry, and you showed them it was a way of releasing themselves. Good job

PoeticallyHigh1 commented on just cry..

07-01-2009

OMG.... BEAUTIFULLY DONE MAN!!! Wow that just touched my heart. That was so beautiful. Your words..... Wow... Outstanding. That was the best poem i've read so far. No offense to anyone else. It's just we should all learn to coax with our emotions. And you said it perfectly. It couldn't have been said better. If I could I'd give this a 100!

DeepEclipse commented on just cry..

07-01-2009

Excellent piece of art here. I agree 200%. My poems are me crying as well. I have quit trying to hide my emotions. I want to be the moment. You not only said some healing words, but put them together in artistic fashion. I am saving this piece to read again. Thanks for writing.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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