somthings wrong with me...

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somthings wrong with me...

somethings wrong with me..
someone help me please - unleashed these
feelings i cant seem to control...
apart of me feels free but the other half just cant let go
im fallin in  pit of bullshit - but this is all i know
all i wanted was a smile aint had one n awhile
im wonderin where did it go....
i couldnt figure this all out, so im tryin to take things slow
no matter how i look at the equation the only answer
i get is an i really just dont know...

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this  way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....
.

so spoke to man that i didnt know
he questioned my personality and he asked me this i quote
"when was the last time you found yourself in love?"
i didnt know what to say because the whole point of this
was to get over her..... so if i answered truthfully i'd be stuck
i looked back at him with a blank face and muttered;
"ok i get it i just give up..."

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this  way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....


i found my way back to your front door leavin this voicemail
wonderin if u were home but i guess ur not so oh well
i feel like i've failed myself actin like a chick searchin for a fairytale
ended up so in love now i am crushed in ur driveway thinkin w..t...f...
am i doin here.. can't blame the booz cuz i aint had a beer
must have the blue's its all that i hear...
hopin to wake up in time somewhere down the line
when you are not here...
i miss u so much.. wish i could give up
these feelings we dont share....

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this  way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....


i guess u can say im caught n the mix - crushed waitin for my heart to fix
this aint a problem this is somethin far more permanent...shit..
solutions im far far from it...this...is exactly where i didnt wanna be
didnt wanna think that i'd sail crash an sink...
now im throwin up my emotions like im drunk
and this mic is my toilet seat... i guess im a mess even when im at my best
i feel incomplete...

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....

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kittman101 commented on somthings wrong with me...

07-01-2009

the poem itself is a true work of art, it flows like a song, and the wording is awesome. Keep up the good work. and lifes experiences will show you the way to greatness

DeepEclipse commented on somthings wrong with me...

07-01-2009

Smooth write. Flowed like a song, but had the wordplay of a poem. You've captured a good style in your writes. keep floodin the page.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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