undissapointing the dissapointed

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    undissapointing the dissapointed

    [my intensions of being a writer are very high got

    my head pointed towards the sky my words flow like a mother

    singing her child a lulaby.. this poerty thing isnt just a faze im

    entering like adolencents and clothes.. poetry is a part of me which

    grows as if it were apart of my body. its a gift.. a passion.. a talent..

    somthing to keep me occupied so i stay out of trouble yes.. but thats how

    it started out to be.. i realized that i could write for other peoples

    understandings and write like it was someone else telling the story..

    so as i sit in my room i wonder why i never picked up a pencil and

    paper when i was younger.. because i feel that if i did i wouldnt have

    got into much trouble as i did before.. would have never made my mom cry

    unless she was touched by my poems.. never would have lost trust in my dad

    unless i didnt write what was appropreate.. never would have lost faith from

    my fam unless i lost my talent to write.. ]

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    warsaw commented on undissapointing the dissapointed

    08-23-2009

    You are delightful to me and I love your talent you have a great one keep on writting little lady one day they will be published, thank you for sharing sincerely WARSAW

    SilentPoet

    08/25/2009

    im not a little lady im 16 nd ima guy thanks.

    XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on undissapointing the dissapointed

    08-10-2009

    Beautiful!! i love it. writing is a part of your life. i wonder the same thing. i wonder if i wasnt so angry at the world and so damaged and hurt, if i would have ever took my moms advice and pick up that pencil. love it.

    SilentPoet

    08/10/2009

    thanks =]

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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