Left Alone

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    Left Alone
    The first time that I saw you
    I knew I had something for you
    I never knew then it was love
    With my spirit flying high above

    I praised your smile and soft gaze
    Worshipped you every night and day
    Till the moment you walked away
    And left my life in disarray

    Affection is a chronic thing
    An affliction that will always bring
    Broken hearts and shattered dreams
    Leaving you full of tears and screams

    Now I live with a hardened soul
    And thoughts that are always bleak and cold
    I only pray that I get another chance
    To get to hold someone's tender hand

    I somehow wished that
    I could read your heart and mind
    I could have saved myself from
    All the pain that I feel inside


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    SubaD commented on Left Alone

    03-15-2009

    Lost love? Can see the words are deep from your heart.
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    arfin09 commented on Left Alone

    03-01-2009

    nice. don't get hung up on constructing rhymes at the expense of speaking your heart.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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