Less Is More

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    Less Is More

    When life is worse,
    I do my best.
    It's not a curse to do with less.
    When I have more,
    Im such a mess,
    I can no more,
    Ignore my stress.
    In my dreams,
    Below a tree,
    I sit beneath it's violet leafs,
    On the grass with blades so gray,
    I gaze at the sky amazed.
    Swirling black with striking lite,
    Disturbs me in the frightning night.
    Leaping from my sweaty rest,
    With creeping thoughts of emptyness.
    Eventualy I want to scream!
    I want to sleep,
    Dont want to dream!
    Still I'm stuck there by myself,
    Just me,
    The air,
    And nothing else.
    About to burst,
    It's like a test!
    My life's curse is my success.


    Japheth

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    mla commented on Less Is More

    04-04-2011

    Less is More - your title says it all. Thanks. mla

    aggieprof commented on Less Is More

    03-06-2009

    Good rhythm, good theme, good work.

    FaeryKing commented on Less Is More

    02-26-2009

    You have the internal rhythm and that is a great gift. I can't advise you on this one. It's perfect.

    gabbzz commented on Less Is More

    02-11-2009

    O LA LA summed up perfectly!!GREAT RHYME SCHEME!! ~!*GABBzz*!~

    beautifuldeath commented on Less Is More

    01-13-2009

    I like this very much. It has a rhythem to it that once you get you can't stop. Very well done. good imagery also.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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