Listen for a moment

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    Listen for a moment

    Its not all that i am, but i am a dreamer,
    listen to me for a moment, and ill become a screamer.
    I am shy,and keep alone,
    listen to me for a moment, and ill sound like a microphone.
    I have way too much to say, too much on my mind,
    stored away for too long, my mind became confined.
    For a long time, i thought it was deceased,
    it just came out of hiding and now ready to be released.
    Open your ears, i have something to say,
    you might learn a new lesson, so turn your head my way.
    Its not all that i am, but i am misunderstood,
    listen to me for a moment, and understand me you could.
    Im no longer shy, but still keep alone,
    listen to me for a moment, and you'll see my voice has changed its tone.

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    cmlestrade commented on Listen for a moment

    09-18-2009

    Unique rhoughts from someone who appears to be a loner. You write in what I call perfect pitch which is not a poetry term Ijust like the way your rhymes and meter compliment each other. You revealed your theme early and stayed with it. A most enjoyable piece.

    Tempy commented on Listen for a moment

    09-07-2009

    i like this, I can relate well written thoughts~!~~

    CLB

    09/07/2009

    thank you.sometimes we need to be heard

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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