Love is a killer

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    Love is a killer

     love is the mind killer makes you weak
    you loose your thoughts you forget who you are
    when you let fate take over
    you loose all control of your life
    when you give in to tempation
    you give your life to sin
    You let fate take the wheel
    you gave into tempation
    you sold your soul for love
    and love buried it
    now you have nothing left
    you walk as an empty shell
    of the person you were before you gave up on living

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    angel33614 commented on Love is a killer

    05-11-2010

    YET ANOTHER GUT WRENCHING TALE OF TORMENT AND PAIN SO DEEP THAT THE TEARS FILL RIVERS OF BLOOD THAT FLOW INTO THE VERY DPETHS OF HELL. LOVE CAN BE VERY PAINFUL INDEED, SUCH A PAIN THAT IT FREEZES THE HEART IN THE INTENSITY OF THE COLD NIGHT. DREARY, DREARY QUITE CONTRARY, SINFUL LIVES WE LOVE TO BURY, IN THE EVIL OF THE NIGHT, I SAW THE TERROR AND THE FRIGHT. FUNNY THING IS I FORGET WHICH POEM OF MINE THAT LINE IS FROM, JUST THE LINE STICKS OUT IN MY HEAD. I HAVE SOLD MY SOUL MORE TIMES THAN I CAN COUNT, ME AND THE DEVIL ARE ON A FIRST NAME BASIS, LOL. HAVE FAITH, THERE IS LIGHT WITHIN THE DARKNESS, THE IS HOPE WITHIN THE SHADOWS OF THE NIGHT, THERE IS A PROMIOSE FOR A BETTER FUTURE TO BETOLD, JUST KEEP FAITH... YES I KNOW, EASIER SAID THAN DONE, TRUST ME I KNOW. I HAVE BEEN AN ANGEL OF THE LIGHT BUT I HAVE ALSO LIVED OF THE DARKNESS FOR MORE YEARS THAN I WOULD LIKE TO ADMIT... PURITY OF THE SOUL, JOURNEY WELL!!! ANGEL
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