My Gem

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I'm Still debating wither or not i want to change anything... I'm very indecisive.

My Gem

I held a gem in my hand there, it felt safe, and secure
but as i held it, i felt it tremble in my finger tips
i placed my gem in a spot closest to my heart
where it stayed safe, warm and loved, and i carried it there

Until one day i stumbled, just for a moment.
i felt my gem falling out of reach
there was nothing i could do to hold onto ot
My gem went tumbling down onto the ground. unseen

I've searched for hours, even days without a trace, or news
to think that not long ago i had my gem with me
i held something so presious and dear in my hands
i can't imagine never being able to hold my gem again

To You, My Gem, i know that i'll see your face again
you see, you fit perfectly, in my hand and in my heart
i will never shine the way that you shine. but i'll try
i promise to you my love, i will become a better version of me.

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angel33614 commented on My Gem

05-03-2010

i have your answer you seek, don't ever change a dam thing! be who you are, never be someone else but yourself. You are perfect just the way you are, you should never have to change yourself for another, never! Learned this one the hard way as well. There is never anything wrong with trying to better oneself but it should never be to make someone else happy. True love doesn't work that way, it is not healthy, and will tear you apart from the inside out, trust me... Perhaps the JEM you speak of was just a colorful rock, when you truely frin your JEM you will know and it will be as perfect for you as you are for it, never change perfection!!! purity of soul, journey well...

UntouchedSoul

05/07/2010

Thank-you so very much! Yea i'm kinda learning things the hard way, real quickly. i never really took advice in my younger years.. teenage rebellion lol.. but i certainty am learning that taking advice is real helpful.. guess that's a sign of growth :)

thecross commented on My Gem

04-29-2010

Nice emotion packed write about lost love with an upside of learning from the loss, good job.

UntouchedSoul

04/29/2010

Thank-You so much :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

UntouchedSoul’s Poems (15)

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Empty Promises (Revised) 3
Your Silence 4
Lost 6
A happy face 2
You 3
Hidden 4
Love is a killer 2
Love, Cant Help You Now 4
A Dream-Like State 2
Dreams 5
Empty Promises 4
when it was simple 2
A dark new place 2
..Loveless 2
My Gem 3