..Loveless

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    ..Loveless

     has it come to this? trapped in a loveless love
    where more time is wasted then spent.
    conversation is dry, words arn't cheap.
    smiles are rarely see, eye that never meet.
    there are no hands left to hold.
    Neither can say whats in their thoughts
    As the fire dies in her eyes.

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    Rhymer commented on ..Loveless

    05-11-2010

    Too be trapped in a loveless relationship, a terrible place to spend one's life
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    UntouchedSoul

    05/12/2010

    indeed

    angel33614 commented on ..Loveless

    05-11-2010

    ANOTHER SAD, SAD LOVE SONG THAT CHILLS MY HEART TO THE CORE. I WEAP AND I CRY WITH EVERY WORD I READ FOR I CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN AND TORMENT, SO SAD. I KNOW YOU MAY NOT AGREE NOW BUT I DARE TO SAY YOU ARE BETTER OFF TO MOVE ON, WHY PUT YOURSELF THROUGH SUCH PAIN AND AGONY FOR THE SAKE OF LOVE. TRUE LOVE WOULS NOT TREAT YOU THIS WAY, THERE IS MORE TO BEHOLD, WITH THE PROMISE AND DREAMS OF FUTURES TO BE TOLD. NO WORDS I CAN SAY CAN EASE YOUR PAIN, BUT I AM HERE AS A FRIEND, EYES BLIND, AND EARS DEAF, ANYTIME YOU NEED ME. PURITY OF THE SOUL, JOURNEY WELL!!! ANGEL
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    UntouchedSoul

    05/11/2010

    Thanks always. :) i know that moving on is always the best solution but yet its always hard to take the 1st step.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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