Loved

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    • ShanneN
    • A working class hero is something to be.

    Loved

    I keep this song on repeat because it reminds me of you.

    You are never out of me head, thinking of you is all I do.

    Tell me im beautiful, even if you don’t think I am.

    Lie to me and tell me you are always thinking of me too.

    Take my hand and look me in the eyes, tell me you love me.

    For all I know, this is all lies but all I want is to feel loved.

    You give me this feeling, love, and you make me great.

    You make me feel like ive got the world in my hands.

    But  I only feel that when you hold my hand.

    I havent got as much confidence as I should.

    Occasionally walking with my head down, as if im no good.

    And im not cocky but I know im great, and I deserve someone great.

    That is the reason I want you, you are great. No, you’re amazing.

    And when you sing to me, no matter how bad you sound, I feel like im in heaven.

    Like the angels are singing to me. And when you think something is wrong,

    Just because im not talking, there is nothing wrong, im just listening to your voice,

    Because it makes me feel safe and comfortable. One more thing, I hope you know

    That this is for you. Because I appreciate you and how you make me feel, loved.

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    angelchaser commented on Loved

    10-04-2010

    This is another beautiful poem, Shannen. You have a lot of passion in your heart to give and any boy that would turn it away is, in my opinion, a damn fool. What you describe about lying to you in this poem reminds me of a song by Lijie, the singer I told you about. It's called "Lie To Me".

    lastyl commented on Loved

    07-17-2010

    Oh, the bliss of being in love, we've all been there and while you're there it's great!! I could feel the weight of love in your heart and see the love in your words. Beautiful job!!

    xMilesSmilesx commented on Loved

    03-26-2010

    negraaa, i really like this shitt. dos thumbs up! blah blah, 50 characters long!

    charlesdarling commented on Loved

    12-19-2009

    This is very simple the way you worded yourself. I like how you expressed the way being loved felt to you. This is very pleasant to read. Very well done!

    Kanye commented on Loved

    11-14-2009

    this poem is real nice. i feel every line in the poem. it told me the story you wanted to tell. i caint wait to read another :-]

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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