Untitled For Reasons

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  • ShanneN
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Untitled For Reasons

Don’t leave me alone, these thoughts, they hurt,

Although we’re still as close as Ernie and Bert.

It’s a burning flame inside my soul,

Stop feeding it, remove the coal.

Can’t turn on the radio, sad songs assured,

Like an idiot, I sing along, every single word.

I know it’s going to hurt, even leave a scar,

But it’s hard to turn back when you’ve gotten this far.

I’ve broken down, crying on the floor

Hoping no one would open up my door.

I still love you; you claim you love me too,

But really, REALLY, was this the right thing to do?

You need help; you’re mentally not okay,

But I promised id be here for ya, every single day.

I just want you to be able to talk to me, tell me your life,

Even the minor details like that time you got cut with your knife.

You’re a part of my life, a part of me.

I hope this works out, I hope this will one day be.

But for now we can only be friends,

I just hope in the end,

we can make our relationship ascend.

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Musicmynded1 commented on Untitled For Reasons

11-02-2010

Nice well rounded emotion and piece.. good flow and rhythm.

charmlessman2d commented on Untitled For Reasons

07-21-2010

any reference to Bert and Ernie is Brilliant in my book. If you mentioned the cookie monster, it would have been a trifecta of genius. but really, i loved the poem dearly

Mandi commented on Untitled For Reasons

07-21-2010

I pparticularly liike you r odd refernces in this piece.Even the "minor detalis". this was a good one.

lastyl commented on Untitled For Reasons

07-17-2010

great job once again, it's a pleasure reading your thoughts!!!

Artie commented on Untitled For Reasons

07-06-2010

I like the way you tell this. I felt as if I were in a conversation with you. 10 from me

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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