Mind Company

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    Mind Company
    sporadic thoughts spill on this paper,
    sentences are delivered,
    pen slithers across the page swiftly
    symbols are pieced together
    to display mental pictures flashed by words
    DON'T THINK, see the images and figures
    that miraculously form in your mind
    DON'T THINK I said,
    SEE, I said
    There's no sense in this
    for the 5 senses do not apply
    art, words transforming into
    silent images silhouetting across
    the brightened screen of your mind
    give it color
    give it features
    crate your own dance and dialogue
    play with it, use it
    DANCE I said
    sporadic thoughts pieced together as an offering
    now they are yours
    mind visiting mind
    thanks for inviting me in.

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    Tempy commented on Mind Company

    08-23-2009

    hair sporadic thoughts spill on this paper,sentences are delivered, pen slithers across the page swiftly i can see neck DON'T THINK I said, SEE, I said legs knees down now they are yours mind visiting mind thanks for inviting me in arms crate your dialogue sporatic though as an offering thighs play with it, use it dance I said t shirt There's no sense in this for the 5 senses do not apply art, words transforming into silent images silhouetting across the brightened screen of your mind give it color give it features face senses taste touch smell hear see eyes mouth nose ears toungue mental flashed the think pen slithers across the page swiftly symbols are pieced together to display mental pictures flashed by words DON'T THINK, see the images and figures that miraculously form in your mind
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    knight4696 commented on Mind Company

    08-23-2009

    Sporadic thoughts pieced together as an offering now they are yours mind visiting mind thanks for inviting me in What a great verse and no, thank you for inviting me in!
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    CongoNetherland commented on Mind Company

    06-20-2009

    This is an awesome deconstruction of the creative process - except you gave no imagery at all! How did you do that? You are the David Copperfield of imagery! You worried so much about symbols of imagery that we didn't get any. Even still, you did provide the raw stuff of imagery - desire and concept unformed - which is very cool. Usually, it is the other way around: an image with no concept behind it.: such as Gnashing teeth and I fall" . . . . ? Which is a big wtf moment. At least this gives us a truth: the dsire to communicate beond simple images.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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