MOTHER

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  • Lost Love

    MOTHER

    Mother, you had promised me that you wouldn’t go
    But whatever happened, I just don’t know
    When I came of age, you weren’t there
    And you had been gone for quite a few years

    You didn’t go because you wanted to
    It was death that had taken you
    I guess you had wanted to stay as long as you could
    But they say only God knows what’s good

    I guess he didn’t want to see you suffer anymore
    And for you, he opened the glory door
    But for me, I just didn’t understand
    Why He had to take you before I became a man

    one who could repay you for all the things you did
    one who wished you were here just like when he was a kid
    Every time I see a mother, I think of you
    And I tried to imagine the things for you that I would do

    You died when I was just ten
    I didn’t understand much then
    But now that I’m beginning to understand more
    I wish you were here now as you were before

    May God be with you wherever you are
    And may there be on your crown, many stars

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    Indigogreen16 commented on MOTHER

    05-22-2009

    this is so sincere and moving. its compassionate, passionate and emotional; keeping the mind captivated by the spirit of love. nice job.

    ecthommo

    05/27/2009

    thanks for commenting

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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