My Bonds Lay Broken

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For you Niecy!! All my love!!!

My Bonds Lay Broken

My bonds lay broken,

My wings freed, yet sore:

They ache from disuse.

 

It has not been long

Since I have felt

That burden, that weight,

So far from forgotten.

 

Atlas was I—

That worldly weight

Upon his shoulders

His eternal punishment,

But mine no more.

 

My joy is an aura,

Radiant as the stars

That dot the walls

Of Atlas’s celestial jail.

 

My bonds lay broken,

My wings freed, I soar

Away from the place of abuse.

 

 

 

KatieKlassen5_2010

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SavVySam commented on My Bonds Lay Broken

06-10-2010

Oh I love this freeing and expansive write of liberation!;) Nicely done!

Zep

06/10/2010

Thank you for reading and your awesome review!! Blessings!! Peace!!

simoneaugustus commented on My Bonds Lay Broken

06-10-2010

Powerful and poignant work here. The ending was incredibly intense! Love it!

Zep

06/10/2010

Thank you for reading & reviewing and perfect rating. My niece is a gifted writer for sure... blessings to you! Zep

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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