Today My Friend Said It All had to End

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Losing a friend at any cost is painful. This poem is my aching outlet... :( No rating requested...

Today My Friend Said It All had to End

And so another friend is lost

My friend doesn’t want to share my life

She said “…one-on-one” is all she wants

Not to be social with my friends too

And still my heart so grieves a loss

A tearful goodbye, I said today

‘cause you didn’t want to share me…

With no other friend and child of Christ

You would not so sacrifice

Though we prayed aloud, you & I

You screamed, spat and you cried

But your tears were not of sadness

No, such as were just jealous rage

You said you couldn’t do it,

Ah hah, but was it worth the cost?

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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