My Brother

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    This poem is for my brother alec. He was always there for me during my very abusive childhood. He comforted me when I needed someone!!! Alec I thank you and love you very much!

    My Brother

     Though it has been years,
    You were there to dry my tears.
    With your caring heart and smiling face,
    I always knew I was in a safe place.

    Now you have to be far away,
    A guardian to others, do not sway!
    For you will always be,
    The greatest hero to me!

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    Mosfabulous commented on My Brother

    07-23-2009

    This is a good poem even though it is a sad one. Good job and keep on writing.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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