My Escape.

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    Just a little thing I thought up that wouldn't leave me alone until i wrote it down.

    My Escape.

     I've made up places,
    with people to fit.
    Imagined their faces,
    their humor and wit.
    A world to escape to,
    when life fails again.
    Where what I want to do,
    makes thier day begin.
    A world completely mine,
    morning, noon, and night.
    Where everything is fine,
    every day a delight.

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    kpeery09 commented on My Escape.

    03-23-2010

    This is truly a wonderful piece, it reminds me of how I am when I want to escape reality and go into my mind to draw things. I give you 10
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    kage commented on My Escape.

    02-04-2010

    this is a great little poem it makes sense and flows well , i like it .rhyme is good and you have a great little work here
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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