My King, His Queen

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    My King, His Queen

    If i could find the one who would treat me as his Queen
    I would go out of my way to treat him as my King
    So that Me, He, We, could live the American Dream
    As if a feen i would be his supplier,
    as if dat green, id never be a subtraction just a multiplier
    so that we can become something more than 2x1
    and start a generation new, never looking back on da past
    and the hell we had to go thru
    taking our love day by day, and making love so damn good
    that for what we have, even the devil would pray,
    Id hold no secrets from my King,
    giving him knowledge of whom he has chosen
    to with much love be his Queen
    and standing before the jealousy of the haters
    as i with tears, accept his ring.
    Knowing the road we have to walk is a long way from being paved
    i dont mind walking barefoot on the gravel
    until we without a map, find our way.
    If i could truly find that one to treat me as his Queen,
    trust,
    he will never have to doubt that he is anything less than,
    MY KING !

    © sdg 3-11-09

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    poetheart87 commented on My King, His Queen

    09-17-2009

    Good luck on your search and let me know where to find one ;) Your writing is wonderful, it flows easily past the tongue and your emotions stand out and it truly speaks of you. Love it, keep writing.

    xdavidabramx commented on My King, His Queen

    05-02-2009

    I love this poem. It's raw, and it reflects how I feel at this very moment, too. Wow, what a strange coincidence!

    outspoken1

    05/28/2009

    Thanx i appreciate the comment on my poem, i think alot of people feel that way today ya know...

    xdavidabramx commented on My King, His Queen

    05-02-2009

    I love this poem. It's raw, and it reflects how I feel at this very moment, too. Wow, what a strange coincidence!

    Stark commented on My King, His Queen

    04-27-2009

    hm. Not bad. It's a got a good rhythm, overall. I do wonder why you used the words "dat" and "da" randomly though...you only use each once, and they just seem kind of out of place. Also, what is a "feen"? However, I really like the part where you say "I don't mind walking barefoot on the gravel..." and the concept behind the poem is good. Try reading this poem out loud; it might help you in finding any awkward parts or parts where the flow of the words are a little off.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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